这个母亲节,给妈妈写一个童话故事吧

发表于 讨论求助 2023-05-10 14:56:27

小时候,妈妈总用童话故事哄我们睡觉。但你有没有想过把童话故事进行全新地改编,讲给妈妈听呢?



这里就有一群这样的孩子,他们发挥奇思妙想——经典的安徒生童话在他们的创作下,有了不一样的味道。


如果,你也能够为妈妈改编出如此动听的童话,也许是这个母亲节最好的礼物哟!




夜莺之歌

两江新区星光学校四年级十三班张霁雨锋


月亮像一枚薄薄的纸片风筝

缓缓地飘向夜空

静谧的大地沉浸在乳白色的月光里

一只美丽的夜莺

在远离皇宫的一片祥和的森林里

无忧无虑地歌唱——

世界那么大,只手握不下,

小小一片叶,无欲便是家。

夜莺的歌声是那么优美,充满了动人心魄的力量

森林里的动物们都被这富有魔力的声音惊醒了

他们在树丛里翩翩起舞

他们在树枝间腾挪跃动

他们跟着夜莺一块儿大声地歌唱——

世界那么大,只手握不下,

小小一片叶,无欲便是家。


人们听到了夜莺的歌唱

禁不住纷纷赞叹:这可是世界上最美的歌声啊!

这消息很快被中国的皇帝知道了

我的天!

皇帝以为在他的御花园里

所有事物都是举世无双的

他必须要夜莺在御花园里为他歌唱

皇帝派出的侍臣终于找到了夜莺

夜莺为皇帝展示了她独一无二的歌喉

皇帝的眼泪流到了脸上

是的,皇帝的眼泪流到了脸上!


好景不常在,美好的事物总是遭人妒忌

日本国给中国皇帝寄来了一只人造的夜莺

钻石、红玉和青玉装饰的人造夜莺啊

和皇帝的宫殿是那么和谐

人们惊叹于它数十遍重复歌唱而永不倦怠的歌喉

却渐渐地忘却了真正的夜莺

真正的夜莺啊,只好收起了美妙的歌声

落寞地飞离了皇宫


皇帝病了,皇帝也是会病的

黄金黯然失色,权利无能为力

死神狰狞的面孔让皇帝心惊胆寒

此刻,他需要音乐

他需要心灵的慰藉

可是人造的夜莺断裂了发条

再也发不出一丝半点的声音

死神啊,就要夺走皇帝的金剑、令旗

还有那辉煌的王冠

这时,真正的夜莺来了!

她用动人的歌声点燃了皇帝生命的火焰

她让沉醉的死神交还了准备从皇帝身上夺走的一切!


皇帝重获生机

是的,他将重新审视生命的意义

权利的内涵

他将永远保守与夜莺之间的秘密

他时常哼唱着一首美丽而朴素的夜莺之歌——

世界那么大,只手握不下,

小小一片叶,无欲便是家……




《打火匣》故事改编

天台岗小学邹一浩楠


从前有这样一个村庄,那里的天空干净得没有一朵云;那里的山坡草长莺飞;那里的鲜花开遍每一片绿色的山冈。在那里,无论太阳升到怎样的高度,散射出多么炽热的白光,村庄永远躲藏在大树的阴影下面,安然的呼吸。因为这是一个魔法村庄。小男孩已经长大成人,即将离开村庄去外面的世界闯荡,男孩不会魔法,男孩的妈妈给了他一个打火匣,并告诉男孩:“我的孩子,要是你遇到了什么困难,那就点亮打火匣吧,我会来帮助你!”


于是,男孩自己出去参军了,成为了一名士兵。

一个漆黑的夜晚,士兵觉得太黑了,于是他打亮打火匣,这时候,士兵的妈妈出来了,他对士兵说:“儿子,你遇到了什么困难?”


“我觉得太黑了,妈妈,你能为我点亮整个房间吗?”


“这太简单了!”于是,整个房间被点亮了,“对了!我忘了告诉你,一个打火匣只能用三次,三次过后就不能用了。”


士兵点了点头。


几个星期后,士兵感觉他太穷了,于是他又点亮了打火匣,士兵的妈妈又出现了,士兵对妈妈说:“我的妈妈,我实在是太穷了,你能给我变点财富出来吗?”

“这太简单了,但是记着,你还只有一次使用打火匣的机会了!”


士兵又点了点头。


过了几个月,士兵的钱花光了,于是他想当上司令官,因为当上司令官他就有钱了。


于是他又点亮了打火匣,士兵的妈妈又出现了,他对儿子说:“你又遇到了什么困难?”


士兵说:“妈妈,我现在又没钱了,要是你让我当上了司令官,我就有数不清的财富了。”


于是,士兵的妈妈让士兵当上司令官。


现在,士兵又恢复了财富。


可是,当上司令官的士兵并不会打仗,更不会指挥别人打仗,在一次战争中,他一上场就被敌人杀死了。临死前士兵又想点亮打火匣,可惜他已经没有机会了。




《这完全是真的》故事改编之《一根羽毛引发的血案》

两江新区星光学校伍丽霏


一天,太阳落山后,所有的母鸡都飞上木架,开始打起瞌睡来。有一只母鸡,羽毛很白,也很爱美。当她飞上木架的时候,用嘴梳理了几下羽毛,有一根小羽毛落了下来。“掉了一根羽毛怪可惜的,不过我更漂亮了。”她毫不在意地说了一句,然后闭上眼睛睡觉了。


“你听到刚才那只母鸡说的话了吗?为了要好看,竟然啄掉自己的羽毛,我真瞧不起她。”和她相邻的一只母鸡和另一只母鸡小声地谈论着。


不巧,这话被楼上的猫头鹰妈妈听见了,猫头鹰妈妈就对丈夫说:“我亲耳听到一只母鸡竟然把自己的毛全部啄光,好让公鸡把她看个仔细。


”隔墙有耳,他们的话又被楼下的鸽子听到了,他又给鸽笼的其他鸽子们说。


这样一传十,十传百,最后故事就变成了这样:“五只母鸡把她们的羽毛啄得精光,为的是争取一只公鸡的爱情,结果她们因为全身流血过多而死。”


这个故事传到了那只掉了一根羽毛的母鸡耳朵里,她是一名新闻记者,觉得这样的事情太荒诞不经了,于是决定去调查一番。


她走街串户,追根溯源,调查到最后发现居然自己就是故事中的那位主人公,这让她哭笑不得,于是提笔下了一篇报道——《一根羽毛引发的血案》。


在报道的最后,她郑重的提出,有些传言就是这样越传越离奇,但我们不能对这样的假消息偏听偏信,应该客观公正的看问题,如果条件允许,不妨实地考察,眼见为实,在事实面前,谎言不攻自破。




小锡兵复仇记——续写《坚毅的锡兵》

高滩岩小学文皓


看着心爱的舞蹈家瞬间灰飞烟灭,坚强的小锡兵第一次流下了伤心的眼泪......


这时,又是一阵风吹来,壁炉里响起一个声音,“小锡兵,你为什么哭泣?”


“Who  are  you ?”小锡兵惊奇地发现壁炉里有一团蓝色的火焰在上下飘动,。

“你是西尔菲德吗?美丽的空气精灵。”


“Yes,Can I help you?”


“我被黑色小妖精使坏变成现在这个样子,还把舞蹈家烧得只剩下一件饰品,She is my friend,我要回去报仇,我必须救她!”


“勇敢的小锡兵,我愿意帮助你。”


话音刚落,小锡兵立刻感觉自己的身体在一点点膨胀,只见他的头、身体、左手、右手、左腿全都恢复了原样,精灵还把舞蹈家的饰品变成他的右腿。Great!小锡兵高兴地跳了起来,恨不得马上冲出壁炉去。


“可爱的小锡兵,可恶的小黑妖有个时光宝盒,只要将宝盒打开让时间回到过去,舞蹈家就会回来。但是......”


“Thank you ,Thank you very much!没等精灵把话说完,小锡兵已经扛起毛瑟枪,跳出壁炉,直奔鼻烟壶。

“可恶的小妖精,赶快交出你的时光宝盒,不然我就让你见识见识我毛瑟枪的厉害!”


“哼......哼......”小妖精发出几声冷笑,“如果你让时间回到过去,美丽的舞蹈家将会得到重生,但是,你又会变回只有一条腿了,哈哈哈......”


听到小黑妖的话,小锡兵顿时愣住了,他看了看自己刚刚长出的右腿,用手不舍地抚摸着。“怎么办?怎么办?我又变回了一条腿,一条腿......”但是,为了救回舞蹈家,小锡兵无所畏惧,他毅然地扣动了毛瑟枪的,只听“嘭”的一声枪响,小黑妖化成一股黑烟逃走了。小锡兵轻轻地打开小黑妖掉在地上的时光宝盒,宝盒瞬间喷射出万丈光芒,舞蹈家从宝盒里走出来,跳着欢快的舞蹈向宫殿门口走去。


小锡兵再一次流下了眼泪,这一次是高兴的眼泪。




一个豆荚里的五颗豆

重庆市沙坪坝区高滩岩小学魏子尧


在一个成熟的豆荚里住着五颗豌豆,它们谈论着“难道我们要永远在这儿吗?”“将来谁会走得更远呢?”


一天,豆荚被打开了,滚落在一个小男孩儿手中,“哈哈,这些正好可以给我当子弹用!”小男孩说着,把豆子全都装进了玩具手枪。


叭的一声,“现在我要飞向广阔的世界了”第一颗豌豆说完就飞走了。“我将直接飞进太阳里去。这才像一颗勇敢的豌豆!”接着第二颗也飞走了。另外两颗说“我们也要飞得更远更远”!最后那粒小豌豆说:“我飞到哪儿就住在哪儿吧”。


后来,它被射到了一户人家的窗台上,这儿住着一对母女,生病的小女孩躺在床上,妈妈为她的医药费早出晚归的忙着。小女孩儿看着小豌豆一天天地生根发芽、开花长大,苍白的脸上竟露出了笑容,身体也好多了。


现在你们知道谁是走得最远的豌豆了吧?没错,正是这颗最不起眼的小豌豆,因为它给别人带来了希望和快乐,它才是最棒的小豌豆!




重庆版《小锡兵》

天台岗雅居乐小学张钉晗


大家知道我是谁吗?我就是最后被融成一颗锡心的小锡兵,我坚强,我勇敢,我再一次被小主人重铸,获得新生,踏上了第二次奇遇之路:


话说中原西部地区有一个地方号称三大火炉之首,它地处长江上游,那里火辣辣的天,火辣辣的人,火辣辣的火锅很畅爽,冰粉凉虾黑么甜!椒盐普通话黑好听!


网红城市就是不一样,坐个长江索道“排队两小时,坐车5分钟”,主人安慰我,“来都来了,好歹还是要坐一坐,看一看吗,整天呆到宫殿里,有什么意思嘛!都看了几百年了,花还是那个花,人还是那些人,生命在于运动!”


我都快挤成片片兵了,好不容易上缆车了,山水环绕,错落有致,和童话王国丹麦各有千秋,可惜爱跳芭蕾舞的妹妹没来,还好没来,估计她要被挤到缆车顶顶上去一展“舞艺”了!(窃笑几声!)


“小锡兵,我们又见面了!”一个虚弱的声音从对面传来。


黑色小妖精突然从对面游客口袋里冒出来。


“怎么哪里都能遇见这个小黑妖!”


“热死了!受不了了,不愧是三大火炉之首,老朋友,救救我,出门忘带水了!”


“哈哈,你也有求我的时候!”


“给我一口水喝吧!重庆这个地儿太火爆了,连水都卖空了!我还要去看网红景点洪崖洞!我还要在妖界发抖音视频呢!我帮你实现三个愿望,怎样?”


“太好了,第一个愿望,小黑妖,把我和小主人送到洪崖洞”。


我手舞足蹈,开心的叫起来,“洪崖洞我来了!”终于不用挤成片片兵了。


当年的我瘸着一条腿,淋着大雨,钻过阴沟,被水老鼠咬过,被大鱼吞过。今天终于可以两条腿站在洪崖洞这块地方了!


扑面而来的歌声让我口水流了一地,“人潮人海中 有你有我;火锅,小面,让我排到脚痛。人潮人海中 是你是我;串串,抄手,让你吃不够”(此处音乐歌词改编自黑豹乐队的《无地自容》)


我和小黑妖自带双“11”两轮车,“走路基本靠抖,, 游吊脚群楼、观洪崖滴翠、逛山城老街、赏巴渝文化、看两江汇流、品天下美食。岂不爽哉!


“小锡兵!小锡兵!”我努力睁大双眼,终于在排成长龙的火锅馆门口旁边一个小洞发现了声音的来源。没想到是水老鼠,第一眼没有认出来,居然长得油光水滑!估计火锅吃多了。


“我已经痛改前非,不收买路钱了!” 水老鼠摸着自己的胡须很稳重的说。“我跋山涉水来到洪崖洞,此处有美食,美景,比丹麦那个地下水沟有烟火味儿多了。”


“走,兄弟,我带你去一个好地方,绝对是惊喜!”水老鼠笑嘻嘻的说。


迎头一看,四个红色大字“巴渝剧院”映入眼帘,古色古香的古黄色吊脚楼和红色墙柱形成强烈反差,让我精神为之一振,剧院的门忽然开了,舞台上出现了一群熟的不能再熟的面孔:“夜莺,癞蛤蟆,鹳鸟,赛跑者,海的女儿,冰雪女王,拇指姑娘……,安徒生爷爷笔下的人物都在这儿聚集了。


“你们怎么都来了?也不提前通知我一声。”


大家高兴极了,七嘴八舌的说重庆人民太热情了,太喜欢他们了,把它们全请到巴渝剧院了,准备和重庆的小朋友们一起过一个快乐的“六一”儿童节呢!


“好呀!我们把安徒生爷爷一起叫来,来一场儿童节的狂欢。”


小锡兵高兴的说,“我们再逛逛南山一棵树,吃吃磁器口麻花,赏赏洪崖洞吊脚楼夜景,再喝喝嘉陵江的水,生活岂不美哉!”


走呀!小伙伴们!(此处重庆版的《江南》背景音乐想起)“吃火锅不数芊芊,吃串串才数签签的我,家住在丹麦城,爱看重庆台,街坊邻居正在演……”




Five Peas From A Pod

重庆市人民小学余卓尔


Spring comes, and everything wakes up, so does the family of peas. Their whole life has been limited inside the pod. So they decide to do something new.


 “I want be a basketball star.” Says Jason.


“You know what, I will be a leader.” Says Zac.


 “Ummm, I’m will be the prettiest pea ever in the world.” Said Taylor.


 “I want to be the greatest scientist in the world.” Says by  Emma.


 “I just want to be a happy person.” Says the youngest child, Erin.


 Then, they open the door and fly out of the pod.


Jason, who wants to be a basketball player unfortunately drops into the ground. However from there, he starts his new family and has a new life.


Zac gets picked up by a farmer and brought to a group of peas. And there, he becomes the ruler of those peas.


Taylor flies into a river. She swims in the river, and the water makes her grow bigger and more round day by day.


Emma goes into the stomach of a chicken, and there, she does research of a chicken’s body.


Erin, the youngest child, flies all over the world by taking a dandelion. But one day, she wants to rest, because this is the new thing that makes her happy. So she goes into the ground next to a small house. Inside that small house, there’s a little girl lying in the bed coughing: “Mommy, if the spring doesn’t come back, so does my life.”


Time flies, little Erin is starting to grow out of the ground and have new leaves come out.


“Honey, look, spring is here!” As Erin grows out her new leaves, the mother of that little girl notices her.


 “Wow, this is such a beautiful plant, I can feel spring finally comes!” the little girl screams with happiness. And later on, the girl is healthy again.


Erin feels her life is powerful and meaningful by helping the girl and the mom. And at that time, she feels she is the happiest pea in the world.




The Snail and the Rosebush

树人小学三年级汪子淞


Once upon a time there lived a rose and snail in a garden. "Wait till my time comes. I will do a great deal more than grow roses or give milk, like you or the cows!" said the Snail.

“I expect a great deal from you. May I dare ask when this is going to happen?" Said the Rosebush.

"I'll take my time. You're always in such a hurry!” Next year the Snail lay in almost the same spot, in the sunshine beneath the Rose Tree.

Many seasons passed and the two were getting older. Neither of the two had moved much, especially not the rosebush. The snail criticized the rose for having done nothing in life. "You're an old Rosebush now. You must hurry up and die, because you've given the world all that's in you. You have led a very easy life.” said the Snail. “Certainly. 


Everything was given to me but still more was granted to you. I've only been able to give roses but you? You are so richly gifted - what have you given to the world? What do you intend to give?" said the Rosebush,


"I've no intention of doing anything! The world meant nothing to me." said the Snail and he went into his house which lay on his back. As the year went by the Snail had turned to earth in the earth, and the Rose Tree had turned to earth in the earth.


I believe the moral of this story is that one shouldn’t waste their talent nor their short time on this Earth. It is up to all of us to make the best use of our abilities to make the world a better place. Now I am trying to help you, my dear friend, to enjoy my speech. I hope you will give me an opportunity to improve myself and help others. Thank you. 




The Snail and the Rose Tree

高滩岩小学李恒宇


When spring came, in the garden, bloomed fresh Rose Trees and grew thousands of new snails. One little snail poked his head out of the shell. Opened the eyes and stared at the budding branches of the Rose Tree. Little as he was, he’s so curious to know what was beyond the rose tree. Finally, he muttered to himself, “I will climb to the top of the tree, exploring the mysterious and colourful world”.


Other snails learned about his plan and laughed at him,

“Are you crazy?”

“I just want to conquer myself.”

“You’d better stay on the ground as our ancestors did.”


The little snail said nothing but set off slowly with his heavy shell.

 

Slow as he was, he made progress every day. Several days later, he arrived at the trunk of the Rose Tree. The sunshine became stronger and stronger. It’s so hot!


“Come on buddy, my leaves will protect you from the sunshine!” Said the Rose Tree.

The little snail kept moving under the shade of the leaves.  

 

A few days passed by, and he arrived at the branch of the Rose Tree. The air became drier and drier. He was so thirsty!


“Come on buddy, I collected the dew for you!” Said the Rose Tree.


The little snail kept moving after drinking the dew.  

 

At last, when the Rose Tree was in full bloom ,the little snail arrived at the top of the Rose Tree. He laid in the flowers, enjoying the fresh air and blue sky that his ancestors and mates have never seen before. The Rose Tree was dancing in the wind and said proudly.


“You did it! Your time has come.”


The little snail learned when you are determined and brave, even the barriers will give way to you.




The little mermaid

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After the little mermaid became foam, the sea king didn’t allow anyone to close to any human being. But years by yeas, the plastic that human threw into the sea was a big big danger to all sea animals.


The mermaid sister Rose who has the most beautiful curly golden hair decided to go to the palace to talk about the problems with the queen Elizabeth.


However she still remembered how the little mermaid became foam. How frightened she was! And the sea king’s words around her, “Never close to the human being , never speak to the human being!”


But when she saw the fish swan in the plastic bottles and couldn’t find the way out, when she saw the shark’s stomach full of plastic bags and couldn’t eat anything else, she cried. She made her mind to speak to the queen Elizabeth, but it was impossible with her fish tail.  So, she went to the sea witch’s scary house.


The witch offered a potion to help her, but the little mermaid had to trade her lovely golden curly hair for human legs.


The witch also told her, if the queen didn’t speak to you, you would turn into sea foam.


The little mermaid made the deal. She drank the potion to change her tail into human legs.


Did she successful? Yes! Of course yes! Recently the queen Elizabeth passed the policy against the plastic! She made it!



以上这些改编的童话故事,来自于丹麦王国驻重庆总领事馆携手重庆海沃塔文化传播有限公司举办的“中丹战略关系建交10周年”系列活动——首届海沃塔杯安徒生童话故事改编大赛的作品。



这次活动得到了重庆市教育委员会的大力支持,共有超过100家幼儿园及小学的1000名学生报名,其中300多位小选手在海选中脱颖而出,于复赛现场演绎了他们独立改编创作的童话故事。

 

比赛中,他们用鲜明、生动、形象的语言,对《海的女儿》《拇指姑娘》《坚定的锡兵》《夜莺》等家喻户晓的安徒生童话故事,进行了精彩演绎。展现了小朋友们积极、乐观的精神面貌,活跃的思维力和创造力。值得一提的是在活动的现场,丹麦企业麦蔻奶粉以及皇冠曲奇准备了非常贴心的试吃、试饮以及绘画等活动,让所有的大朋友和小朋友通过视觉和味蕾感受丹麦文化。



这次故事改编大赛决赛将于5月27日在重庆市渝中区国泰艺术中心举行。入围决赛的小朋友们,将用他们的奇思妙想再次创作出一系列精彩绝伦的童话故事。以下是入围决赛的小选手名单,一起为他们打Call吧!


幼儿组


李易宸  陈妮可  唐紫宸  陈胤泽  郁柠杉 陈宥熹  彭煜芸  柏玥伶  王怡恺  吴蕊纾  曾梓芮 王甑 李欣怡  杨紫瑞  郑园川  朱慧敏  周子腾  何芷萱  黄佩珊  王李峻熙

小学组


杨熙恩  熊科懿  钱俊淳  徐诗宸  张熙彤  张霁雨锋  伍丽霏  魏子尧  陈思安  杨懿雪  田涵予 李恒宇  文皓  段寓潇  李泓岑  杨姮怡  黄一宸  李容坤  汪子淞  蔡嘉译  王紫骞  张倚豪  程然 张金妍  游镇铭  余卓尔  朱應焜  刘知静  李政霖  杜思颖  蒋旻彧  沈昊阳  周彦妮  代珺元 邹一浩楠  徐艺玮  张钉晗  华紫佚  江雨穜  李催莱


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